Okay that was a lot better

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I don't think though that this map is suitable for teaching 1on1 too well. First problem is that there is too much (action) going on all the time, leaving too little time to explain things you do. Also this map is just tiny and random and I wonder why you played it in the first place

. Almost every sane european dueler neglects this maps for this reason.
Interesting maps to play on and do commentary would be maps with some space. E.g. final rage, stormkeep2, reslimed, runningman_remix, soylent, warfare
As these maps require you to predict the opponent and leaves you more time, space and freedom for decisions. In this case, enabling in-game sound would make sense though. For your current clip disabling the sound was no problem I suppose.
Keep them coming
