@Flying Steel:
Ok, I've read the whole story and stuff and I gotta be honest. I'm confused like a hell hole. I have no idea what is going on in that story. All the different names and species, their interactions with each other and the arena thing (which btw when I read about the first time I felt my heart drop out of my body, meaning I didn't like it) it's like 'ah goddiege goo goo' in my head.
I mean, it's not bad per se, just that I have absolutely no idea what is going on. I suppose only smart people are able to follow your story, I'm not one of these species.
But I gotta say, I liked the story up till the Encounter Era, but the Trial Era and the rest need a total re-write IMO. I definitely didn't like the arena part, and the rest I just couldn't understand by the life of me. Also, I vote for another name for the 'Crusilex', what are that, a species or an empire? I think it sounds too close to crucifix and I don't think it would be good to have anything that sounds close to a religious thing.
However, before continue on I need to know the answer to this question: How is the single player campaign gonna be? Is it going to be UT style, i.e. arena matches (deathmatch, tdm, ctf etc.) or is it gonna be a 'real' (so to speak) single player with a linear approach, a.k.a. Half-Life, Prey, Farcry, Killzone etc.?
Cause the thing is, I don't want to be a part of anything with arena style single player campaign, I want to help in creating a real single player campaign. The reason being, I don't think arena single player is a true single player game, it's just 'online play' but offline with bots i.e. boring.
PS. I will read more indepth the whole thing, from start to finish and see if there is something that needs changing, I've been just reading straight down once, I bet I missed something.