Suggestions for a tutorial

[a thing]

http://athingis.boldlygoingnowhere.org/tutorials/ssh.php

If you get an XML parsing error about "no element found", that's NoScript screwing things up. You'll have to (temporarily) enable my site.

Do you have any suggestions for this tutorial?

Please do not put this on Digg or your blog or anything. My little home connection couldn't take the load. When I think it's ready I'll publish this on Nuxified.