I created this map from scratch using GTKRadiant.
It can be downloaded from here:
http://markfurneaux.googlepages.com/mark%27smaps

Have Fun!!

Any questions or improvements would be appreciated.
(sorry for the cheapo webpage)
P.S. You may need the Nexuiz mappack for certain textures to work.

Cool, um.... could we have some screenshots please?

Just had a look. I'm assuming its a first try at mapping more or less?

I'd say you did quite well. Be more careful with your item/weapon placement though. Space them around the map more. (Placing them all in one area will cause players to congregate there rather than exploring around the map)

Texturing and brushwork looks fine, lighting is nice and bright.

Nice one!

Ya, it is my first map like ever.
here are some screenshots. [they are from the beta, final release is better]
[sorry they are embedded]


http://picasaweb.google.ca/lh/photo/2uJ ... directlink
http://picasaweb.google.ca/lh/photo/VpQ ... directlink
http://picasaweb.google.ca/lh/photo/cGX ... directlink
http://picasaweb.google.ca/lh/photo/fXH ... directlink
http://picasaweb.google.ca/lh/photo/CU_ ... directlink

i will most likely make a version of this map that will take into consideration your advice.