hi all
i've made another map for nexuiz
If you want to give some comments or some advice i will be very happy

DOWNLOAD TOKAM_BETA_v1

Like yeeaaaah dude!
Really nice map.
I particularly like the little boxes inside the boxes inside the boxes
Looks like it's got a good 'flow' to it, I've not played it with other players yet but i can imagine it's a good map for 1 v 1.
Hmmm, for constructive criticism, the floor seems a little odd , like there is nothing there but it kills you right away anyway, but that's not a big problem.
I quite like when you fall off a map you have a little time to see it in it's entirety, if the fall is too long you get bored though, I think soylent has it about perfect, facing worlds it's maybe just a little too long.
Of course the problem with this is that you have to texture the underside of your map.
Also if you put some extra space under the map like this it gives extra fun for the hook users.
what do the green and red taps do?

vcall add TOKAM to 2.5! Looks like a very good 1on1 or DM map. GJ

Chubby wrote:vcall add TOKAM to 2.5! Looks like a very good 1on1 or DM map. GJ

thank you very much chubby

Rad Ished wrote:what do the green and red taps do?

nothing
i made that like an industrial complex so i put some tubes and of course some unuseful taps

i copied the taps in warfare DDDDDD

no other comments ???

i've made another version of my map

DOWNLOAD TOKAM_BETA_V2

have fun

edit 1 :

Terence hill report me a bug in svn of my map relative ad the fan near the crylink
i post the latest versione because i tried to resolve the problem.

DOWNLOAD TOKAM_BETA_V3

i'm not sure to have reolved that, so please try my map and report bug

Just playied the map (off line).
Very good work on this map. I like maps reproducing realistic ambient.
This industrial complex have a lot of details.
Details make the map nice to watch and help a lot
in orientation into the ambient playing the map first time.
Good the room with some nexuiz sshots.
I like the sound of jump pads.

Now only some problems but easy to fix.

1-
u can put the trigger_hurt a bit higher so
the untextured polygons of map became not visible when u fall (see image).

2-
i found a cilinder non aligned with others
as u can see in the image.

IMAGE

3-
only a hint to reduce the pk3 size (10Mb is too big i think)
i found in tokam_texture folder 3 big sshot in TGA format
for a total about 8Mb
u can convert the TGA in JPG at 90% so u can reduce pk3 size about 7Mb
and the quality on images is very good;
the result is a pk3 about 3Mb instead 10Mb.

thanks for the comments giuse.
I made the canghes in my map
here the link for the download

DOWNLOAD TOKAM_BETAV4

i made another one version of tokam
i hope this is the final

DOWNLOAD TOKAM_BETA_V7

I've been playing this map on my public DM server for a week or so now. It's gotten good results.

I like it, and I usually don't like floater-type maps. So that's saying something

Haven't checked the latest version yet. Looking forward to trying it out later.

Dokujisan wrote:I've been playing this map on my public DM server for a week or so now. It's gotten good results.

I like it, and I usually don't like floater-type maps. So that's saying something

Haven't checked the latest version yet. Looking forward to trying it out later.

wai a sec to try the beta 7 because i have another version here

last and final version for tokam
you can download here

I don't like how the jumppads don't face the way the shoot you. I never have liked th is in games. Other than that, I think this map is great and maybe even good enough to be included in the game with some small additions. Great work BARTUC.

[-z-] wrote:I don't like how the jumppads don't face the way the shoot you.

i can not understand
can you explain me ????

[-z-] wrote:I think this map is great and maybe even good enough to be included in the game with some small additions. Great work BARTUC.

what kind of addictions ???
i can put that additions now to improve the map
i can make with no problem a v1r1 of the map for the servers


edit 1 : i cancelled the final version of the map to receive your addictions -z-

BARTUC wrote:

[-z-] wrote:I don't like how the jumppads don't face the way the shoot you.

i can not understand
can you explain me ????

[-z-] wrote:I think this map is great and maybe even good enough to be included in the game with some small additions. Great work BARTUC.

http://z.nexuizninjaz.com/videos/tokam_jumppads.ogv

the jumppad doesn't visually communicate the actual direction it's about to through me. I think you should rotate it to by in like with the direction the line to the target is.


The ooze defies gravity!
http://z.nexuizninjaz.com/videos/tokam_ooze.ogv


There are some bland textures, like the pipes... I think they should be more realistic style metal to really do the map justice.


There seems to be a lot of small healths, but not so many small armors. I think some healths should be replaced with armor.


DM is the only gametype, you should add >> TDM, LMS, KH maybe even add DOM points.

Don't limit yourself to DM.

[-z-] wrote:

BARTUC wrote:

[-z-] wrote:I don't like how the jumppads don't face the way the shoot you.

i can not understand
can you explain me ????

[-z-] wrote:I think this map is great and maybe even good enough to be included in the game with some small additions. Great work BARTUC.

http://z.nexuizninjaz.com/videos/tokam_jumppads.ogv

the jumppad doesn't visually communicate the actual direction it's about to through me. I think you should rotate it to by in like with the direction the line to the target is.


The ooze defies gravity!
http://z.nexuizninjaz.com/videos/tokam_ooze.ogv


There are some bland textures, like the pipes... I think they should be more realistic style metal to really do the map justice.


There seems to be a lot of small healths, but not so many small armors. I think some healths should be replaced with armor.


DM is the only gametype, you should add >> TDM, LMS, KH maybe even add DOM points.

Don't limit yourself to DM.

thank you very much
i wll repair the bug and put the new kind of match soon and i will post the new

hi
i made the changes, so here you can find the last version of tokam
have fun

These two jumppads still throw you a different direction than the way they are point:





The metal pipes are still bland, I think you need a better texture for them. Maybe something from the Trak 5 texture set will help you.


Another thing I just thought of. The bottom of the map end abruptly, perhaps a fog shader that blends the rocks into void would be better.

i can't find a good texture for the pipes in that pack
any idea ???

IIRC: fog shaders do not work in darkplaces.

tundramagi wrote:IIRC: fog shaders do not work in darkplaces.

yeah, the fog hull doesnt work
very bad thing