Screenshots of what you're doing

[Sepelio]

give those red stripes a _glow
and break up the overwhelming red a little bit. some white or yellow lights here and there (or maybe you feel green) could add. and please use another texture for the roof lights. they don't fit imo (and it seems they're not casting any appropriate light at all).

brushwork looks solid, i like that reminds me of quake2 somehow. some simple alterations of the sidewalls would be nice though. looks a bit flat as it is.

The map has been released atm if you want to give me more tips
The lighting in the above screenshot was actually a huge mistake hehe. I forgot to change the colour of the lights after copy paste.
http://forums.alientrap.local/viewtopic.php?t=5657

The screenshots in that map thread are also out of date to some extent.

[C.Brutail]

reminds me of quake2 somehow

No wonder, it's from Quake2

[sev]

Polishing up

[lda17h]

Polishing up

desertfactory is one of my fav DM maps you are making it even better? whoa

[Kay]

not done yet some things look weird

[Kay]

Polishing up

maybe you could add a little gloss to the textures ?

[cortez]

nice retextured diesel power
a little less gloss would be better
and the ground looks too shiny, maybe something rusty would be better

[Kay]

nice retextured diesel power
a little less gloss would be better
and the ground looks too shiny, maybe something rusty would be better

look, with that kind of comment i can do something

[k0jak]

That dieselpower re-texture/remake looks awesome Kay!

Looks very cool.

Let us know when it's fully done, would like to try this in 4v4 again

[Strahlemann]

Heh nice Kay!
Much more techy look you got there. Fits Nexuiz nicely.
And reminded me that i already once retextured it for Nexuiz. So just for the protocol and the guys interested in the map's process: Some picture from the good old q3 days of dieselpower



(the textures used there weren't gpl'd so i had to retextur it to what it is now)