Eh well, you're going to need to fix the problems with it first, such as projectiles exploding against those energy beams.. I also found a random platform up in the middle of nowhere near the top of the map which is very dark, but has some health....... It has HEALTH?! Why? It's literally so high that it requires 2 laser jumps to get up there., and it only has like 5 small health.
Other than that, I like the map. I'll submit it once you work out the main (beams) issue

BTW, may I recommend submitting that other map you showed me a while ago? That was very cool.